Hi, this is short story I’m working on to complete and share. Hope you enjoy 🙂
She was running and not looking back. One look, One heart, One chance. Lily was crunching the leaves in between her feet as she ran and ran for her life! No one knew expect her, what the danger was, it was gaining on her. Rain began to fall, drop by drop until nothing. Lily slowed down as the sun shined through the branches that’s when she knew her fate was sealed.
Hi guys. My poem below is one of my own written favourites and i hope you all like it 🙂 I am back from holiday however, i go on another soon (Birthday present holiday) so i will be less active.
Lips
So close yet so far.
The scabs your picking, the blood your losing
Swollen and tend to the touch yet….
You are always hiding a secret that is bruising.
…
Delicious, tasty, juicy texture,
Lick them up and enjoy the ride.
They stay closed, how dare you deny!
Red raw blushing with desire to be touched.
…
The swirling of your tongue brings so many emotions,
Stella Grant likes to be in control- even though her totally
out-of-control lungs have sent her in and out of the hospital most of her life.
What Stella needs to control most is her distance from anyone or anything that
might pass along an infection and jeopardize the possibility of a lung
transplant. Six feet apart. No
exceptions.
The only thing Will Newman wants to be in control of is
getting out of his hospital. In one week he’ll turn eighteen, and then he’ll be
able to unplug himself from all these machines and actually go see the world.
Will’s exactly what Stella needs to stay away from. But now
six feet apart doesn’t feel like safety. It feels like punishment. What if they
could steal back just a little space their broken lungs have stolen from them?
Would five feet apart really be so dangerous if it stops their hearts from
breaking too?
5*
Good Points –
This book was such a good read it had humour, heartache and
love. The book provided two people who couldn’t touch one another and the
relationship begins to grow making it harder not to touch. It makes you more
aware of cystic fibrosis and what it is like for people to go through. It came
across so well in the books. All the characters were so well placed and fitted
into the story so well. I liked that each chapter was from different
perspectives like one was Stella and then Will it was nice to see different
views of the story from each of the characters. It made me want to cry (p.s- I
am normally heartless ha-ha) so have your tissues at the ready.
Fav Quotes-
“It’s just life. It’ll be over before we know it.”
“I smile at him, and take just that one more stolen step,
until we’re five feet apart.”
Bad Points-
I don’t have anything bad to say about this book as it took
me on the journey of laughter, love and heartache. It was really a good book
and nothing in my view was bad about it.
Overall-
This book is definitely worth a read and I look forward to
watching the film adaptation to compare it to the book.
Ever and Damen have travelled through countless past lives
in search of each other. But just when their destiny seems finally within
reach, a powerful curse falls upon them.
A single touch of their hands, a brush of their lips will mean death for
Damen- cast into the darkness of the Shadowland. Then Ever meets Jude, a
mysterious green-eyed golden surfer boy who understands magyck- and Ever-
better than she does herself. She thought Damen was her destiny- but what if
fate has other plans?
Good Points-
The new character of Jude sets new challenges for Ever and
it tests her relationship with Damen. Roman still up to no good in his twisted
games adding the excitement to the story.
The romance storyline through the books so far is well written into the
storyline and gives the new excitement of challenges testing their love for one
another. I still love the sass of the
twins in the book and looking forward to see where story goes in the next book.
Bad Points-
The book do only have a hint of fantasy such as the magic
elements throughout and this is why I give it a lower rating of 3/5*. This is
only my opinion as I do love more fantasy throughout the books I read. It still
takes a while to get into the plot of the book as the second half is the best
parts which I then have to push myself to read further on.
Overall-
This book was good in the new introducing of new characters
and the new challenges for Ever and Damen relationship. However, it takes a
while to get into the good parts of the book and there are limited fantasy
elements in my opinion.
Just as Ever is learning
everything she can about her new abilities as an immortal, initiated into the
dark, seductive world by her beloved Damen, something terrible is happening to
him. As Ever’s powers are increasing, Damen’s begin to fade after he is stricken
by a mysterious illness that threatens his memory, his identity, his life.
Desperate to save him, Ever travels to the mystical dimension
of Summerland, where she uncovers not only the secrets of Damen’s past – the
brutal, tortured history he hoped to keep hidden – but also an ancient text
revealing the workings of time. With the approaching blue moon heralding her
only window for travel, Ever is forced to decide between turning back the clock
and saving her family from the accident that claimed them – or staying in the
present and saving Damen, who grows weaker each day….
My Views
This is the
second book in the immortal’s series. I was excited to see where the plot went
in the next book and how it would unfold. New characters were introduced which
brought in new challenges for Ever to face and use of Summerland to answer her
queries.
It took a
while to get going in my opinion, I was pushing my way through to get to the excitement.
When the story did reach the excitement, it was good to read, and I finished
the book.
Good points!
The new characters
of two twins (Romy and Rayne) which I loved because I am a twin myself ha-ha.
They added new life to the story which made you want to know more about them
and their roles. Also, Roman who Ever couldn’t figure him out until later in
the book. He added new danger and excitement to the story.
The ending was
good It placed twist in the story so far which left me wanting to continue onto
the next book in the series.
Bad Points!
The beginning of the story took a while to get into, which made It hard to continue reading. Also, I was getting more romance vibes of the genre than the fantasy throughout the book. However, the plot does involve this throughout the books.
Overall
The 3* rating
was mainly on the plot taking forever to get going and I felt a little
disappointed with the story. However, the ending allowed me to want to carry on
with Ever’s journey to see where and what happens next.
